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Out in the open

Contributed by Gigi_15 on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:08:45 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I always think about...
How I'm never good enough
How I'm not pretty enough
How everyone else is better when I'm not
How I could've done something differently

Why do I always do this to myself?
Why can't I keep asking myself these quetions?
Why can't I just let it be
Why can't I ever be satisfied

People look at me and they see this happy girl
Which I actually am..
But in my head..
...All there is, is chaos
A chaos where I find myself fighting against..Me

What I never wanted anyone to know..
What I am ashamed to say..
What I am afraid to say..
Is all out in the open

Copyright © Gigi_15 ... [ 2006-02-21 17:08:45]
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Re: Out in the open (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:51:35 AM AEST
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I can relate to this.. I have dealt with this most of my life.. The hardest thing that has happened to me when I actually believed I was not was when my ex boyfriend the one who made me live broke my heart and shattered it into pieces and I had opened up to him completely and I guess I have a hard time doing that still now... It killed me... This poem was amazing.. I like your poems..

Take care
Christina

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