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Moments
Contributed by
Supafreak575
on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 11:44:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Every moment we are apart, I miss you
Every tear drop I shed adds one star to the sky
Every dream I have of you I hope you have it too
Everyting I feel, I think, or do
I hope somehow it brings me closer to you
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2006-02-21 11:44:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Moments
(User Rating: 1 ) by ANNAMOY on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:26:05 PM AEST (User
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Really nicely expressed but you have missed out the 'h' in 'everything' in forth line but never mind it's so easily done! |
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