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Love is like...
Contributed by
spencer
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Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 11:09:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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No matter how much he loved her
she would never love him back. For
Eric was always rejected by the girls
he fell in love with.
One day eric thought to him self 'love
is exactly like cupids calling card after all!'
AN ARROW THROUGH THE HEART
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spencer
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2006-02-21 11:09:54]
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Re: Love is like...
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by Gigi_15 on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:32:24 PM AEST
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holycrap..well u kinda really have a point..well said and well written:):) short but it gets write to the point..
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Re: Love is like...
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 07:06:13 PM AEST
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This piece misses the lyricism that makes a true poem. I put my ear up to it, but I didn't hear any music. I'm sorry.
Do you read poetry very often? I suggest reading as much of it as you can; for a suggestion, try Seamus Heaney. Listen for the music.
Andrew |
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