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Turning
Contributed by
WaterFountainOfTears
on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 01:18:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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I've been thrown into a whirlwind...
And i can't see the ground
I just don't know what's real these days
When I feel the sky is down
The colors are a blur and...
The tempurature's gone awry
The sounds all come in static
And the best wings cannot fly
I feel the current pull now
And I just don't have control
And now that time has come at last
As it turns, it will unfold!
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WaterFountainOfTears
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2006-02-21 01:18:26]
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Re: Turning
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 04:22:23 AM AEST
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A very interesting poem
Beautiful meaning and concept
Great flow and use of emotions
Good Write
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Re: Turning
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by brew on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 10:10:09 PM AEST
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Confusing.......Its life throughout, with all. We go through it, with all thoughts. Get worse, when in love and you can figure it out. Beautiful write tho.
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Re: Turning
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 12:21:05 PM AEST
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This was brillant. The flow was great it all read smooth and it was well worded. This was very good.
christina |
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