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Will you ever leave my heart
Contributed by
LostInLife
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Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 12:59:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your heart will never die
Your blood still dripping
From when you carved into your flesh
The memories never leave
The sound of your voice slowly fades away
As you beautiful face burns through my eyes
Seeing the scars on my arm
Reminds me of all the pain that you brought to me
The tears that I have cried
Have finally stopped flowing down
And when our lips met for the last time
My heart became a part of you
A part that will last forever....
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LostInLife
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2006-02-21 00:59:12]
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Re: Will you ever leave my heart
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 01:46:16 AM AEST
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emotional outpouring of your heart.nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: Will you ever leave my heart
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:11:26 AM AEST
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Beautifully sad poem
The emotions were portrayed well
The poem has good flow
Nice Write
~Dawn |
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