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Suicide
Contributed by
xo__clandestine
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Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 12:43:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Life can be hard,
you might want to leave.
Take a razor to your wrist
Death will be achieved.
You might just fail,
Just to make a statement.
You mess up on purpose,
Trust in you will be abatement.
Depression might take you,
Just over the near edge,
You don’t fall, you’re pushed,
With Death, you took the pledge.
You risk complete denial,
When it’s over, what will happen?
Put the razor away now,
If you fail, life is misshapen.
Copyright ©
xo__clandestine
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2006-02-21 00:43:26]
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Re: Suicide
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by twick on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 01:32:55 AM AEST
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I wonder if you're a FOB fan? If not and you hate them I mean no offense. If you have no clue what I'm talking about it wasn't important anyway.
Interesting words. I like the end the most. |
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Re: Suicide
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by ShadowFox on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:49:01 AM AEST
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| Strong words. Good write. |
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Re: Suicide
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by happybunnyfan on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:54:55 PM AEST
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| Great write, i know this all too well, keep writting like this, you have a gift. |
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Re: Suicide
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by crazy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:29:52 PM AEST
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suicide is one of my well known topics i used to write lots of thing like this
but you have captured it in a way i could never do.such an extremly well writen poem |
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