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Tapte Liv
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:28:02 PM in AEST
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I wish I was dead
Dead, like the fallen, crushed leaves
Dead, instead of slowly suffocating
Under a mountain of pain
Weeping red hot tears
Since there is no excuse for being
Staring out of eyes that cannot see
Blinded by loneliness, pain,
And your ***** ignorance
Eloquence flees
Head bowed before Sorrow's touch
Lonely eyes, inadequate disguise
Cutting myself to be set free
I can't live like this anymore
This brings no relief
Only an aching detachment
And the sound of tapping keys
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2006-02-20 23:28:02]
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Re: Tapte Liv
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:38:02 PM AEST
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really great poem, dark, but beautiful
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Re: Tapte Liv
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 01:18:57 AM AEST
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Sad but very well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Tapte Liv
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 01:47:59 AM AEST
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Joel this is so heart wrenching. The last line gave me chills and I felt each word. I hope that your going to be ok. Keep penning your thoughts my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: Tapte Liv
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 04:09:11 AM AEST
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| Great write man. Just so sadly beautiful...the first stanza....wow...well the whole write. Thank you for sharing with us, Peace, Laura |
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Re: Tapte Liv
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 02:18:34 AM AEST
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What a painful poetic piece. I hope everything is not as bad as it seems here. Your gut wrenching expression here is purely qualified on all poetic cylinders. A great write, hard to read without feeling sad.
SCM |
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Re: Tapte Liv
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by BRIDGI on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 09:56:53 PM AEST
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| WOW!!!!The whole first paragraph ........I realy felt every word.I felt your whole poem...its exacly how i feel.props!! |
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Re: Tapte Liv
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 02:12:20 AM AEST
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~*Joel*~
My dear friend this is such a sad and heart wrenching poem one cannot read it without feeling such pain and suffering. I hope that things are well with you ~*Joel*~
Your writes tell of pain, sadness and suffering. I wish for much brighter days for you my dear friend. Chin up sweet guy.
*big warm huggers for u*
~*Suzie Q*~ |
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