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MY POEM FEET!!!
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:08:24 PM in AEST
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My feet dont look like no athlete feet and they sure do take the beat of looking like blackfeet.
I went to go check the mail and met someone called buckwheat and it seem complete till I hit the concrete.
I wanted to defeat and delete and eat but not no feet and I sure dont have no flatfeet.
I was running down the street and you could hear my heartbeat and the heat.
I went to buy me some meat and meet me someone named mesquite and he was suppossed to be neat.
Then I took a seat and changed the sheets because it begin to sleet down the street and it look so sweet.
The sleet might look sweet but I dont like sweetmeat .
I went to the store to buy me a treat and some wheat cereal.
Then I went back home and watched the sleet and ate my wheat cereal...(Yummy it was.)
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Re: MY POEM FEET!!!
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:23:39 PM AEST
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that was.......random, lol, dont see a lot of that here.
but fun to read =D
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Re: MY POEM FEET!!!
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by eggflipper on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:30:11 PM AEST
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| sometimes it is fun to see where words will lead you. |
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Re: MY POEM FEET!!!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:44:54 PM AEST
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I just love your poem Butterflygirl!!!! This is great, and very unique, was it frosted mini wheats ?
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Re: MY POEM FEET!!!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 01:32:17 AM AEST
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U r very, very, very creative with the words!
I luv your unique artistic style.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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