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You woke me up with your song
Contributed by
Infamous
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Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:00:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You woke me up with your song
From a sleep of a long
Then I wish I could see you on my way
To thank you for doing it eveyday
I thought I would sleep for eternity
But you came to wake up me
Your voice like of the sea
Like melody of a growing tree
But now you had forgotten
To wake me up eveday
My soul is half-eaten
For I never heard you on my way
That is why I am sleeping
Sleeping for eternity
For you had forgot evreything
From always waking me
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Infamous
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2006-02-20 23:00:19]
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Re: You woke me up with your song
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:26:19 PM AEST
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huh, that poem made me think. very well written though, a lot of us know that feeling.
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Re: You woke me up with your song
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:38:10 PM AEST
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Very moving, lovely but sad...
LG |
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Re: You woke me up with your song
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:14:42 AM AEST
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Interesting poem
Nice use of emotions
Good Write
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