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TRUST ME STILL
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:22:45 PM in AEST
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Darlin, my heart swells with pride
All this luv could neva hide.
Doesn't matter how far away
Smiles in my heart to stay.
Feels good to still have
your trust after 21 years.
Oh my darlin trust me still
Oh yeah, he trust me still.
So long been waiten to
touch you, bodies mergin so true.
We tried to say good bye
But our luv rates so high.
We except each others faults
We ain't locked in a vault.
Eternal enity's flyin so free
From heaven, to Earth-n-sea.
Don't know what else to do
Jus wonna kiss-n-cuddle you.
One more time we'll unite-n-fly
To many years have passed bye.
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emystar
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Re: TRUST ME STILL
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:28:07 PM AEST
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Lovely lyrics, Grrlfriend....done in your unique style....
Was great talking to you tonight...
Hugs
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Re: TRUST ME STILL
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:41:38 PM AEST
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Sweet lady ~*Emy*~, I love so much ur style of writing. You can always draw in ur reader and captivate them from start to end.
The picture, the flow and rhyme absolutely sensational. Always a pleasure visiting ur pages ~*Emy*~
*love n hugs*
~*sue*~
PS who's gonna go back and read it again =-] |
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Re: TRUST ME STILL
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:17:21 PM AEST
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Emy, this is great!!!! Iove all of it, but the last two verses, really got to me wonderfully written,
LG |
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Re: TRUST ME STILL
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:34:09 PM AEST
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very cute makes you wanna like jump with joy inside emy.. great write.. I enjoyed this as usual.. you write so well
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Re: TRUST ME STILL
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 03:59:51 PM AEST
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One more time we'll unite-n-fly
To many years have passed bye.
Wow.. much love here.. my eyes drowning in it.. lovely work. beautiful.. keep em comin.. hugs.. raquelLeah |
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Re: TRUST ME STILL
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 09:37:50 PM AEST
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Emystar
If there were not trust there would be no love.
The two just go hand in hand.
One more time we'll unite-n-fly. "The estacy of being one"
Time is short
To many years have pasted bye.
Very good write,
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Re: TRUST ME STILL
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:11:48 PM AEST
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Isn't it great to have someone you can trust in this life?
My father once said to me the only person you can trust in life is yourself..oh and of course him! he was a great man but I do know now this isn't strictly true.
We all have that special person in our lives or waiting to join our lives.
Great writing again emy.
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Re: TRUST ME STILL
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:25:20 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful wow, touched me in the heart u are mgnificent. Your poem conveys a feeling of warmth and a genuine sincerity. A very lovely poetic etude of romance.
((((emystar))))
btw thank u also 4 your coment.
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Re: TRUST ME STILL
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 06:34:19 PM AEST
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Emy; this is a sweet ode to love. You write with such unabashed honesty every time, and more often than not, I find a smile on my face when reading your work. Keep it up : )
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