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Hope
Contributed by
eggflipper
on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 09:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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And the light that has fallen
upon his eyes,
beckons him,
to witness
the birth of a cloud.
(Wondering if night will be seen again)
And if it be this morning
is all that is left,
this birth
is witnessed in silence.
But if it be
that morning is the representative of hope,
he wishes not to be awake in the afternoon
for his heart has lost love before.
Copyright ©
eggflipper
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2006-02-20 21:57:32]
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Re: Hope
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by poisonpen00ad on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:05:09 PM AEST
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This is just beautiful. Great work.
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Re: Hope
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:24:54 PM AEST
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Interesting style... Well done!
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Re: Hope
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:34:57 PM AEST
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this is different but i like the flow good job..
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Re: Hope
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by travisk on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 04:01:45 AM AEST
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In all honesty, I can actually relate. In fact, its a bit creepy how close it comes to an actual situation--if I interpreted the subtlety correctly.
well done. |
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Re: Hope
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by thesinner on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 05:03:13 PM AEST
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| very moving. I feel you here.Beautiful |
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