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Youthful Aspirations
Contributed by
eggflipper
on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 08:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Tinted windows
complete with sarcasm
and deceit.
Sleepless nights
with condoms
and birth control.
A peaceful sleep
for all eternity.
As children
we once wished
to be invisible.
Copyright ©
eggflipper
... [
2006-02-20 20:45:21]
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Re: Youthful Aspirations
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 11:07:43 AM AEST
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wow...this is...not sure what the words are or how to say it. but it's really amazing...and it's shocking you don't already have comments on tihs. short & sweet, yet it speaks of so much!
- Beth -
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Re: Youthful Aspirations
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by thesinner on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 05:00:53 PM AEST
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| it says so much with so little |
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Re: Youthful Aspirations
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 07:52:36 PM AEST
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A very perceptive and piercing observation. I think it makes its point clearly, mayhap the author's note might be included in some fashion in the poem?
Keep up the great work.
Andrew |
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