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Changes
Contributed by
syenn0512
on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Flowers flowering in the midst of spring and summer,
Flowers perishing in the lonely days of autumn and winter,
How complicated live can be......from this moment to another,
Just like a tick of a clock changes time....changes thing...
that brings no return to what we've done...
In the sorrowful past of our painful lives.
Copyright ©
syenn0512
... [
2003-01-28 20:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Changes
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 09:30:37 PM AEST
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| I can feel your emotions running through this poem. Good work! Good write! Hope you'll submit more of your poem. |
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Re: Changes
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 01:20:58 AM AEST
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| Good work. |
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Re: Changes
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by riverofwords on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 10:23:17 AM AEST
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short to the point great anology
could have read more
peace be your journey
terry |
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