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Rhyme Thought Rythm

Contributed by basspjjv3 on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:53:14 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

All it takes is One Rhyme
One Thought
One Rhythm
To let out your feelings inside
Cause it’s to late to have them back
You won’t let them in anymore
Because now they’re out and have a mind of their own
So don’t fight it
Cause it’ll bite you like
KARMA

All you have to do is open that door
To release your feelings
Instead of inside
These walls are gone
Blood everywhere and it can’t stop
Until you realize your at the top
And you need to be brought down because
Your not the best and everyone can see
That it’s you
Not Me

All it takes is one Rhyme
To tell how your feeling
This moment in time
And it’s not to late
To let your thoughts out
Instead of keeping them inside
One little couplet, metaphor, or simile
Will tell the world how your feeling
Cause it’s your time to shine
And don’t let anyone darken it

All It takes is one Thought
To tell what your saying
And your scared that no one would listen
Because your different and it doesn’t matter
You should speak your mind
And it’ll feel much better
To let it out
Then just keep a smile on your face and hop about

All it takes is one Rhythm
To show the world who you are
So you could be the star!
Doesn’t matter how you do it
As long as it’s from your heart
And not your mouth
Cause sometimes you say
What they want you to say
Strum a guitar and say a word
That means a lot
And if no one understands
Screw them
And shine your light
Because tonight you’re a
STAR!

All it takes is one Rhyme
One Thought
One Rhythm
To let how your feeling inside
And it’s not to late
To let them out
Cause you will always
Have that door
Open
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Copyright Â© basspjjv3 ... [ 2006-02-20 11:53:14]
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Re: Rhyme Thought Rythm (User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 06:26:16 PM AEST
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Good poem, Really nice use of words, a good rhythm, very well done

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