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Edge Of Shadows
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:26:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Another rumour is heard
a story is being told
now everyone thinks something
has happened,
someone is hurtin'
someone is trying to explain
but in the shadows
voices continue whispering.
Self esteem is shattered
tears of frustration
slowly expolde
emotionally spinning out of control.
paranoia is all around
people talk
lips moving but not making a sound...
now on the edge of the shadows
is where you can be found
depressed lying in your bed
as the sun goes down.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2006-02-20 11:26:25]
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Re: Edge Of Shadows
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 03:07:44 PM AEST
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Sad and deep.....well done!
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Re: Edge Of Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:23:45 PM AEST
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A very intense and brialliant write, I get more out of this the more I read it!!
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Re: Edge Of Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:20:51 PM AEST
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whoa! Painful and powerful!!
The title drew me into this piece, but the words are so
raw with emotional anxiety I was held captive to the end!
Very compelling, this was.
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