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Alone
Contributed by
ShadowFox
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Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 02:05:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Alone in the world I hate
Is this luck or is this fate?
The way I feel is so unfair
and it's like the world doesn't even care
They know nothing of pain
and nothing of sorrow
As I begin to go insane
My today turns into another tomorrow
My tears burn my eyes
and hardens my heart
My soul starts to die
and then finally parts
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ShadowFox
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2006-02-20 02:05:24]
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Re: Alone
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by mrpeanut64 on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 02:13:38 AM AEST
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| very emotional, hang in there eventually all pain dims. |
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Re: Alone
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by frankcube on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 04:27:31 AM AEST
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My tears burn my eyes
and hardens my heart
My soul starts to die
and then finally parts
I really liked how you ended it. Powerful.
Please consider some of my poetry too, if you have time. Thank you. |
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Re: Alone
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:42:07 AM AEST
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I know how you feel cause I feel the same. You have probably heard that but I do, I'm here if you need someone to talk to. Great poem!!
-Vicki- |
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Re: Alone
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 01:26:27 PM AEST
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Be strong.....you have your poems to start with..keep writing...eventually you'll see the loneliness will disappear.
Jenni |
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Re: Alone
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by VivreAmoureuxMourir on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 04:17:39 PM AEST
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Whoa..this was intense.
I love it. |
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Re: Alone
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:36:16 PM AEST
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This poem is perfect...It'e very true for me too. Hang in there and nice write!
-Drapes |
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