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when i take my last breath
Contributed by
poetry_queen
on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 07:12:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i want to grow old with you darling
i want life to be good to us
i want a lifetime of memories to
build and cherish around you.
i want to be everything you ever
dreamed i could be and offer you
yet i know one day my name will
be read in the book of names.
when that day, that moment comes,
with my last breath i pledge
to whisper you ahve made every
dream i dared dream come true.
you put the joy seen in my eyes
you put the softness in my touch
the laughter i heard in my voice
the passion when we made love.
few things i have wanted to feel
but a happy life has been one
i love you more than the past, more
than today, even more tomorrow.
you have shown me within my heart
that you are truly unselfish
and my darling, i hope that i also have
shown you the depth of my love.
i will lvoe you each day, as if it was
my last moment to say 'i love you'
my last thought before i fall asleep
will be to feel your kiss in the morning.
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Re: when i take my last breath
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 07:51:44 PM AEST
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| A good poem, I enjoyed it. |
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Re: when i take my last breath
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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that was beautiful, very...honest.
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Re: when i take my last breath
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 09:25:16 PM AEST
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Really lovely...I enjoyed reading this..
Jenni |
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