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last words of desperation
Contributed by
FallenxXxXxangel
on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 11:37:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Darkness consumes my soul
The Pain In my heart is so full
I’m on the edge of death
The only way out is Meth
I’m lost in my inside myself
Taking the knife off the shelf
My soul is somewhere cold
Scars: some new some old
I wander through life with my eyes closed
I’m numb from my head to my toes
You can’t save me
Please, just leave
You’re to late
This is my fate
No matter how hard you try
This is the time now where I say
Goodbye…
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FallenxXxXxangel
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2006-02-19 11:37:49]
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Re: last words of desperation
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by Manda2 on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:47:22 PM AEST
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| Very well written, no-one would have ever known you were only thirteen, your writing is brilliant for an adult! Keep it up! |
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Re: last words of desperation
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by Bohemianlikeu on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 01:24:39 PM AEST
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| I find this to be very disturbing - brilliant. A taste of social reality from a 13 year old, very distrubing! |
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Re: last words of desperation
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 08:19:42 PM AEST
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very well written
check out SmileSkinDeep's things, she's 13 too and her writing's amazing, you'll like it
~natalya |
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