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MaY aS WeLL bE dEaD
Contributed by
Delusions
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Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 08:30:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I may as well be dead,
Close my eyes and do the deed,
Escape from my messed up mind,
Finally be free.
Sick of being nice,
Making everybody happy but me,
Never feeling like Ive done enough,
Never feeling like I can just be me.
Watching every move I make,
Planning every word I say,
Its not a life Im living anymore.
Dont even know who I am,
Cant even begin to remember the real me.
So I sit here feeling alone and helpless,
Wanting to escape this life of make believe,
Staring at this knife,
Mad at myself because I cant make the first move.
I may as well be dead,
Slash my wrist and get it over with,
But all I can think about is the people around me,
And how theyd hate me even more,
If I went through with this planned escape.
I may as well be dead,
But even then I will never be free...
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Re: MaY aS WeLL bE dEaD
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 09:33:35 PM AEST
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omg, i loved that poem. So.... i dunno, real. I've been feeling like that all the time lately, so thank you for that, perfect timing!
~natalya |
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Re: MaY aS WeLL bE dEaD
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by OzChick on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:20:10 AM AEST
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Oh boy, I've felt ilke this before, glad I don't now.
Hang in there and stay strong. Great poem.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: MaY aS WeLL bE dEaD
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by VivreAmoureuxMourir on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 10:47:03 PM AEST
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This is amazing..
I know how you feel. |
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Re: MaY aS WeLL bE dEaD
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by tWiStLe on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 09:45:26 PM AEST
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| Havn't seen or spoke 2 u in sooooooo long, so ur writing is one way i feel like i have... after reading this i was kinda hoping it wasn't exactly wat ur feelin but then i remembered that ur writing has always come from the heart and thats what makes it so great! I miss ya O.H! *kisses* |
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