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The Lady
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Lips like red velvet,eyes like blue glass,
Light colored rose heued cheeks,
posture and poise like shear class,
chestnut hair with goldan streeks,
she had a voice of an angel,soft to the ears,
richly dressed from head to toe,
she look younger than her years,
who is she,do we know?
she wore a sent of flowers,
a breath of fresh air,
whats the secret to her powers,
wanting to ask,but dont dare,
shes the women us girls want to be,
her wisdom is strong,
a heart so warm and free,
her legs sleek and long,
watching her speak from far away,
trying to catch a stare,
men are listening to what she has to say,
as they get a wiff of her hair,
but really her beauty is all shes got,
shes really rather sad,
her hearts in a million knots,
of what she thought she had,
she hides her pain well,
I did'nt really see,
till someone finally had to tell,
about the pain behind her beauty,
Noone wants to get close,they are afraid,
her looks can be deceiving,
they think shes got it made,
Being lonely is not believing,
who would think a lady of beauty,
would be so alone,
she just wants someone to see,
she has no one at her home.
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-01-28 17:40:00]
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Re: The Lady
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 05:49:16 PM AEST
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| Oh Christina, a real heart-wrencher here, great write, thanks for sharing |
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Re: The Lady
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 06:19:17 PM AEST
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| everybody needs someone,,and should never be alone,,,soeone deservs to b love even someone like her,,well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: The Lady
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 10:08:15 PM AEST
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interesting coincidence that we were just talking about such a lady tonight..and the first posting i read is yours...you have described her so well...a very good write!!
rosie |
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Re: The Lady
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 06:51:47 PM AEST
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| A very good write. Sad but good. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: The Lady
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 09:26:28 PM AEST
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the word amazing seems to suit this poem. Very sad and beautiful created a lot of imagery in my head.
Bobo (Joel) |
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