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MR. IVORY SNOW
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 05:33:40 PM in AEST
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MR. IVORY SNOW
Toppings of snow minus zero below....
Mounds of glistening--nature's beau....
He wears top hats on fence posts.....
Cloaks of thick polar fleece he boasts
My silent lover sneaks about at night....
He embraces my heart and cuddles to excite.
Platinum blonde, heavy build, older than all ages,
A generous soul, he renews all he touches.
Creative carpenter with edging skills....
N'er a thing escapes him if he wills!
Velvet mats of welcoming is his specialty,
Untouched, nothing matches his beauty!
Within your body you drop myriads of cells,
Ahhhhhhhh Mr. Ivory Snow, and in each
your creativity shows!
No matches e're found, your Creator's
wisdom excels!
Fabulous fabric fit to be worn only
by the Pharaohs.
Bury me please 'neath a shadow's ray,
A mountain high where frigid temps obey.....
Cover my resting place with snow,
That I might sleep soundly down below.
Created by
LovingCritters
ConSue
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"Snowflakes are one of nature's most fragile things,
but just look what they can do when
they stick together."
~Vesta M. Kelly~
*Snowflake Smiles*
My thanks to Montie
my son for the beautiful
pictures taken around
our house
2-16-06
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lovingcritters
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 05:41:18 PM AEST
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a lovely well written poem my friend
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 05:43:16 PM AEST
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Mom ConSue I have big snowflake smiles after reading ur marvellous write. I love this write. Sadly I've never seen snow, but from what you've written and by the pic's it sounds so nice. Enjoyable as always and thanks so much for sharing this magical piece of poetry with us.
*with love and big warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 06:27:11 PM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous writing, the word usage, expression....just wonderful
~natalya |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by emystar on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 06:42:30 PM AEST
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Nice pictures-n-good write mum.
It's 21 degrees here and we have a light layer of ice-n-sleet. Hopefully no more!
huggs,
yobrat,
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 06:55:01 PM AEST
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| ConSue, Love the write and the snow pics....noticed a big electric tower back there (those are some of what my husband paints)...would that be you in the doorway? It is freezing cold here...15 degrees, and that's the warmest it's been, today. Peace, Laura (who is wearing long johns, jeans, 2 longsleeve shirts and a sweater LOL) |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 07:38:55 PM AEST
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Conni this is so very beautiful. Your words your pictures, always a delight. Tell Monte that he did a wonderful job, and I saw my beautiful conni sue!
PS last time I was there it was 50 below with windchill burrrrrrrrrrrr cold stay warm till spring my friend.
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 08:25:40 PM AEST
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The pictures, your words are magnificent, my sister. It is a shame something so beautiful can be so deadly. Please stay warm and dry and give Montie our thanks for sharing his photographic talents with us. He did an excellent job. Love the music.
Rita |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:46:27 AM AEST
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| This is so beautiful. Peek a boo, I see you.. yes another beautiful creation from God. Pure white.. lovely. There are lots of things that are so beautiful, and we all learn how to enjoy its beauty and how to be safe in that beauty. In one poem I read a long while back, I learned that winter is a she lol.. and now I find out snow is a he. lol. Keep writing, I am learning fast lol.. huggies.. raquelLeah |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 01:52:32 AM AEST
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great job in this consue
hugs |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 12:44:47 PM AEST
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beautiful pics and wonderful write
peach |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by Hurretje on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 02:14:30 PM AEST
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Highly enjoyable, beautiful pictures with a wonderful poem.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 04:51:59 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful poem, seems very nice to have snow.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:13:08 PM AEST
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wow...just lovely ConSue!!!
Is that you in the doorway?? :)
Great piece! |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 04:22:58 PM AEST
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| I've been away for a while but you're quaint style of poetry clearly hasnt. Chris. |
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Re: MR. IVORY SNOW
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:56:03 PM AEST
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Firstly the opening bars of that tune reminds me of a Beatles song! I can't remember which one cause it's nearly 11 0 clock and I'm fairly tired!.
I just wanna say I love your big production poetry.
Another winner, thanks for the happiness.
J. |
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