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No title, just read it
Contributed by
cherrycoke
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Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 04:00:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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No, wait, don't go there again
I see it in your eyes
Your lies will only bring more pain
I'm not convinced in your persuasion
Aren't your sick yet of this conversation?
Why are you hiding? I know who you are
You remain where you've begun and haven't gotten very far
What's this? Turning your back to me?
Walking away means facing the same unchanged life
Unlike you, mirrors never lie
I'm not convinced in your persuasion
Aren't you sick yet of this conversation?
Why are you lieing? I know who you are
You remain where you've begun and haven't gotten very far
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cherrycoke
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2006-02-18 16:00:32]
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Re: No title, just read it
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 04:15:51 PM AEST
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it's a good poem, though kinda short, still seems like there's a little history behind it.
kinda had/have the same thing going on, so i guess that's why i liked it so much.
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Re: No title, just read it
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by shortcut on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 04:16:14 PM AEST
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| I've had people like this in my life all too often, turtles. Good writing. Love the repetitveness to make the point. |
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Re: No title, just read it
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 05:07:53 PM AEST
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A deep and emotional write. You have penned this very well. You don't need people like that in ur life. Move on and may u find someone who is worthy of ur love/friendship.
*warm heartfelt hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: No title, just read it
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by cherrycoke on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 06:07:09 PM AEST
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ok, apparently I need to be more obvious in my poetry. I am talking about MYSELF in this poem. Did you catch what I was saying in the 3rd verse? "Turning your back to ME... Walking away... MIRRORS never lie" The person speaking here is looking in the mirror the entire time, convinving himself / herself that he / she is something they're not.
I must not be very good at this writing stuff. |
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