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If...
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 01:21:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If...
If I were a vine
with my tiny tendrils
I would climb
and wrap myself around you
for much needed support
If I were a violet
with leaves of deep green
and dark purple flower
I would flourish and grow
happy in the shade of you
even in the darkest hours
If I were the mighty oak
how sturdy and strong
I would be
Though, I would still need the support
of your solid ground, my love
to grow my roots and steady me
If I were the loveliest rose
a true crimson red with
thorns so thick
You can hold me
oh so tight my love
Your gentle flesh
I shall not prick
If I were an entire meadow
of foxtail and fescue
I would never tire my love
of waving in the wind
day after day
at sweet
kind
wonderful you
Penned February 2006
Laura Horner
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Re: If...
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 04:04:55 PM AEST
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so gentle and sweet ...I really liked this
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 05:23:20 PM AEST
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that was really beautiful, sweet.
~natalya
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 05:31:33 PM AEST
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Laura I absolutely adore this write my dear friend. You have managed to wash my doubts and make me believe that true love really does exist. A sweet, touching , heart warming write beautifully penned. Rock on my friend.
*love n hugs*
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Re: If...
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 09:17:07 PM AEST
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Laura, this definitely shows your deep love and committment to your husband. How lucky you both are. It is rare these days to find couples like you too. I wish you both the very best of love and life.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: If...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:50:23 AM AEST
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| Perfect show of love, this poem is so natural, and so are you and your love for your husband.. I know he is well pleased with this delicate poem you have written for him, and thank you for sharing us too.. love like this is wonderful to share.. so, so wonderful. hugs, from me, raquel Leah |
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 01:18:11 AM AEST
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This was written in that timeless... old world style I love so well..
Metaphors abound!!
It's bloody fantastic!!
(apologies for my tardiness)
Truly..
Billy |
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Re: If...
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 01:19:11 AM AEST
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This was written in that timeless... old world style I love so well..
Metaphors abound!!
It's bloody fantastic!!
(apologies for my tardiness)
Truly..
Billy |
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Re: If...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 10:26:34 AM AEST
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| Wow, such deep love put to words. Love and imagery. Beautiful write...Mike |
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Re: If...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 01:47:04 PM AEST
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Wonderful loyal devoted love expressed in brilliant metaphors. I enjoyed it very much, Laura.
Thank you very much for sharing.
Take care,
Tim
:-)
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by Willofree on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:34:44 AM AEST
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If ... If you were the universe, you'd single him out as your favorite star, I bet! A very loving heartfelt expression of devotional love for your husband. You don't seem to be anxious about that...... :)
Well done Laura,my friend
Will/Terry
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Re: If...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 04:52:24 AM AEST
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picturesque. soothing and lucid.
A beautiful collection of vivid metaphors.
im so pacified right now. hehe
Awesome write. |
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Re: If...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 06:29:43 PM AEST
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Laura, this was [is] stunning! My God! to be in love like that. To be
inspired to write with such depth and devotion and love.
Amazing, sweet Laura. I am so touched by the sentiment here,
I am near tears. And how wonderfully you've written it as well.
So very well done, my friend. So very well done!
~Breezy |
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 01:24:32 AM AEST
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Laura, this poem is very beautiful I love the flow and you can tell your totally in love beautifully expressed and written
JENNI |
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Re: If...
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 09:05:25 PM AEST
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Aww this is so lovely and beautiful.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: If...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:48:55 AM AEST
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Beautiful my sister Laura as all of your writes are. truly a heart stopper as only one as dignified and peace loving could write. One who has experienced the real meaning of love brought only through marriage.
((((Laura)))) peace 2u my sister and dear
noble friend.
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