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Thirteen Lives
Contributed by
KimElmer
on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 07:49:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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My cat he lost his mind last night,
He said he had some mad insight,
Then told me that things weren't quite right,
And went out for a wild cat fight.
I told him this wasn't the thing to be done,
He said he just wanted a little fun,
But like Icarus, burned out in the sun.
He killed a rat and felt quite fine,
Just for me as a Valentine.
I felt this was dome kind of sign,
He told me not to pay any mind.
I said this wasn't the thing to be done,
But he just filled his belly full of rum,
And went out in the street shooting his gun.
Copyright ©
KimElmer
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2006-02-18 07:49:56]
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Re: Thirteen Lives
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by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 09:17:17 AM AEST
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| hha wow man gr8 poem..its kinda silly,funny yet has some profound meaning for those who can feel it..well..it shows real talent rather than sum amateurish silly mushy kinda stuff...keep in touch poet... |
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Re: Thirteen Lives
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 06:13:39 PM AEST
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lol, that was refreshing. This site was getting to depressed, it needed some humor.
and you did a good job of adding it.
~natalya |
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Re: Thirteen Lives
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by Tiffyo4 on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 01:39:48 PM AEST
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not my style but good write
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