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Lost For Words
Contributed by
boy_in_blue
on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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At the tip of my tongue
are the things that i feel
they're stuck in my head
remaining concealed
no words come out
when i try to speak
the scribblings i write
are feeble and weak
there isnt a word
that can express
just what i feel
with any success
is the awkward silence
is all i hear
the words i knew
all disappear
i cannot describe it
i dont know what to say
i am lost for words
i'll find them someday
so until that day
all i can do
is write little rhymes
and think about you
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Re: Lost For Words
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:26:23 PM AEST
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| Excellent write .... love this poem. |
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Re: Lost For Words
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by TiNyOnE on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 07:24:06 PM AEST
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omg i love you poem... continue on writing your poem is exactly how i feel.. when i try to write about this kid im with the words dont seem to go together
~~~tiny~~~~ |
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Re: Lost For Words
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by TiNyOnE on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 07:24:24 PM AEST
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omg i love you poem... continue on writing your poem is exactly how i feel.. when i try to write about this kid im with the words dont seem to go together
~~~tiny~~~~ |
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Re: Lost For Words
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 02:32:08 PM AEST
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Iggy... I just love your work!!! Your writes are so simple and sincere... Great going!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Lost For Words
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by psyonara on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 06:09:55 AM AEST
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| nice poem! yeah, I think simplicity and sincerity is what makes this one so powerful. :+> |
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Re: Lost For Words
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by PrincessPage on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:33:49 PM AEST
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| I know exactly what you mean! Sometimes the best words are the simplist |
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Re: Lost For Words
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 10:29:57 PM AEST
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| You are simply an amazing writer, I wish I had your talent when I was your age. |
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