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Trapped

Contributed by vicks on Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 12:48:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

So I feel trapped, isolated, confused-
One point in my life
I felt if I were attracted to girls
That lead to me expairmenting with girls
Witch lead to sex with girls
Witch lead to getting my heart broken by girls

Since then the bottle was my best freind
-wash away the tears I cried for you
-wash away these feelings I have

This cant be my reality - all alone with
A case of 24, drinking my life away by myself

I moved on
Got over you
Discovering a new side of me
Only this time my heart and mind wasnt open to the life

Still finding my self
Sucking on the bottle
Cant find away out
Dont trust anyone
Till thier was a knocking on my door

A bright young coolie boi moved in up stairs
Me proclaiming I m a Lesbian - I spill my guts out to him
-out on a drunken night playing pool
were we became best freinds

You know what they say
put a girl and a guy long enough
under the same roof
they become a item

the guy started crushing on the girl,
the girl sees this guy as marriage material

They go out
Girl wont put out

He still stays, says he loves her

He cooks for her feeds her - showers her with love

But still somethings not right
Shes trapped in the closet.

Copyright © vicks ... [ 2006-02-17 00:48:42]
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Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 03:18:41 AM AEST
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Aside from the massive amount of spelling errors( witch, which) that sort of thing, this was really good.

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