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What Secrets
Contributed by
MissMandy
on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 07:59:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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What Secrets – that are hidden Here-
Inside my head – alone –
I don’t know what to say – Believe
My Soul just wants to moan
The deepest Yearnings of my Heart
In silence truly hide –
The unknown sighings of my Mind
To no one I confide
To bind the Soul and to pretend
About the way I am –
It is a Fate much worse than Death
But no one gives a damn
This theme is lost on lesser Souls
Who fail to see the Truth –
Who think that life is always good –
This thinking is uncouth
But don’t try to fool your own heart
For those who cannot Trust –
Have quite sad and depleted Souls
That dry and turn to dust.
Copyright ©
MissMandy
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2006-02-16 19:59:20]
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Re: What Secrets
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by Jrtoews on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 09:39:29 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem alot the format was really well done and it was different good job! |
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Re: What Secrets
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 03:37:00 PM AEST
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| well done, a nice read |
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Re: What Secrets
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 12:19:15 AM AEST
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i loved it, the word usage and expressions were so real.
great poem
~natalya |
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Re: What Secrets
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 09:41:01 PM AEST
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its a good read.......but just to formal sounding, dosent sound like u, lol meh im just crazy.
SM |
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