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i had this dream many times before!?

Contributed by sweetpanic on Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 07:44:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

She's walking bare foot on the edge of the cliff
Her thin legs becoming stiff with every step
She's wearing a long stainless gown
Fits her perfectly as the silk lace
Flows freely in the wind

Her Rosie full lips part
As her breath quickens
Her piercing blue eyes
Start to water
As she looks below

The waves crash violently
Against the shore rocks
Making her heart beat louder
Her smooth, long hair sails like the ship
As the wind blows with so much scorn
She feels torn between life and death

Her skin is numb
Her blood flows black
Her heart stops
Gently her weak arms rise
Like she is hanging on the cross
She leans closer to the edge
Shuts her shaking eyes
No longer feels the jagged rocks
But air beneath her slit feet

She suddenly wakes up
Sees nothing but walls crammed with shadows
From the moons glare
Realizing she's back in her room
She's back in her breathless tomb of blood and tears
"I had this dream many times before!?"

She had this dream once before but never saw the last of it
She's laying their broken hearted,
Shattered bones,
Tearless, motionless covered in blood full of venom and sins
Always alone, even in death

Copyright © sweetpanic ... [ 2006-02-16 19:44:08]
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Re: i had this dream many times before!? (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 05:29:40 PM AEST
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a little disturbing, but REALLY great poem.

wonder if people ever do have dreams like that...

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