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Why the Sea?
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 12:31:45 PM in AEST
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Because all the waves, currents, the constant motion
Like poetry, hold so much, so many things
But it really means only one thing
It means peace
All I see is his surface
Maybe that’s why he seems so peaceful
I cannot see his inner thoughts
His pain
At times he lets his anger loose
And ships are turned, lives destroyed
As people die and cities drown
I see what peace can do
When held too long…
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 01:28:05 PM AEST
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| `a lovely write i also write alot on the sea it mabey because its mystery |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 03:10:15 PM AEST
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Very nice piece of work. I thought of Poseidon's anger when I read this. I think you touched on something magical with the comparison of the sea to poetry. They do "hold so much." As advanced as man becomes, he will never control the forces of nature. Great read!
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 04:52:40 PM AEST
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Excellent write...
Well done!
Jeff
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 12:06:34 AM AEST
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Great to see a new post by u David.
I'm delighted I stopped by to read ur wonderful write. I love the sea. I usually go there for it helps clear my head.
A captivating piece of poetry penned so well.
Well done my friend.
*warm hugs*
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 11:14:44 PM AEST
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*grins at you*
I like this. I like how it goes up and down, in waves, if you will.
I like the message at the end. Those last few lines are so true. Peace can be one of the most turbulent things...
Great write my friend.
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by Archie on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 03:23:29 PM AEST
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I can understand that.
I think this is more like a thought than a poem an analogy on life and why you should have a close friend to talk to when times get rough. Yes it is hard to be like the sea. Great write!! |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 04:48:30 PM AEST
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an interesting piece of wrok here.
I really like that.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 03:12:59 AM AEST
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Interesting, interesting. I like those last lines.
No punctuation? That's a bit different. I think "currents, the constant motion" might need to be either "the currents...." or else "currents, constant motion". make both those parts symmetrical.
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 06:22:12 PM AEST
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I find the sea totally mesmorizing.
When I was a kid on holiday my dad would take us to the fish and chip shop in the evening,
and we'd sit and watch the tide roll in.
I was always fascinated by the lights from the harbour reflecting on the water.
Thanks for helping my mind to resurface great memories.
Great poem.
J. |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 08:33:16 PM AEST
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even at its angriest, the sea seems peaceful. nice write.
wiz |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by JGB on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 04:52:29 AM AEST
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Why do you love the sea so much?
Beautiful!
Joanna |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 11:28:11 PM AEST
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you say so much with so little.
the ending speaks volumes.
i guess you can say you have yourself a new fan. |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 03:27:01 PM AEST
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| Holy moly, I wasn't expecting an ending like that. (The whole thing caught me by surprise, really, as I'm a fan of the ocean, but at the same time I have an slight fear of open water.) But anyways, I really enjoyed this one. It has such a serene feel to it, and the thoughts, feelings, and emotions evoked by the ocean are more than visible in this write. Well done. |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 08:39:13 AM AEST
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brillant... This was a very well written poem.. I think you are very talented..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by brew on
Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 12:32:18 PM AEST
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Such beauty with your write
The sea, its a calming thing for myself
I wished I lived closer
I have a fantasy write on the sea(ocean) its not a bad one , kinda seductive in a way.......Just something whiich would release the bad, and let new in. Loved it
brew~ aka Dayna |
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th September 2013 @ 12:09:30 AM AEST
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Some things just can not be explained.
The sea is something very powerful, amazing, and I can only imagine the peacefulness.
I like the way you compared the sea to poetry.
Thank you,
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Re: Why the Sea?
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 11:39:34 AM AEST
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brilliant, deep and beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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