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No title as of now
Contributed by
audreyann
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Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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While walking around my world,
I always feel the stare.
I try to ignore them,
and concentrate elsewhere.
Reminders aren't nessecary
I know I'll never be the type
I'm large and plain,
never one to cause a hype.
Don't pay attention,
ignore me if you will.
I don't need a broken heart,
I don't want more tears to spill.
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audreyann
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2003-01-28 14:20:00]
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Re: No title as of now
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 02:40:46 PM AEST
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| "Broken Hearted" would be good, or 'Within this lonely heart" or "Teardrops of my Own", hope those help you some, keep up the good work, |
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Re: No title as of now
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by Dani on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 06:27:49 PM AEST
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How about "Tears To Spill" ??
Nice write... I enjoyed it |
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Re: No title as of now
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 03:02:22 AM AEST
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Or, how about "Don't Pay Attention"?
Good try-the ballad with rhyming 2nd and 4th verses a stanza was the very very first format I used-namely in a work I remember as "that Old Bore"-a hidden critcism of a class bully. Problem was, he destroyed it-not because he knew what it was about-but because he saw me using the word "zoingering" (should've used the word zooming instead. Nuts.). |
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