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Shutdown
Contributed by
PoetBaby814
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Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 07:41:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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When I look in my eyes What do I see?
Eyes of firey gates burning to be free.
A misunderstood child lost and alone,
Trying to turn her heart as cold as stone.
When I look deep down inside of myself
I find my feelings stored on top a shelf
Locked up tight like a safe, hidden away.
Hidden inside my turtle shell I'll stay.
Bottled up inside like a soda can.
Waiting for some one who can understand.
If no one comes soon I might just explode,
If not then I know, inside I'll implode.
Copyright ©
PoetBaby814
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2006-02-15 19:41:33]
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Re: Shutdown
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 07:52:22 PM AEST
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| I like this. It has good rythm and metaphors. |
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Re: Shutdown
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 10:24:29 PM AEST
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reminds me of some of my writing, and reminds me even more of how i feel sometimes.
keep up the good work.
amazing poem. |
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