|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
I Believe
Contributed by
Drapes
on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 07:22:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
I believe
I will amount to something more.
I believe
In happiness and that I deserve it.
I believe
In telling the truth.
I believe
Everyone has a voice.
I believe
In love at first sight.
I believe
Time is running out.
I believe
There is something more to this life.
But you believe different.
Copyright ©
Drapes
... [
2006-02-15 19:22:46] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I Believe
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 08:00:40 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Uplifting. I like the twist at the end - the last line: But you believe different. Strong statement. |
|
|
Re: I Believe
(User Rating: 1 ) by moses on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 08:59:32 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
short and sweet. well done, simple yet holds a lot in it...enjoyed this one a lot.
keep it up,
-m-o-s |
|
|
|