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To hold the wind
Contributed by
glindahoney
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Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 11:48:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I tried to hold the wind
When I was a small young girl
My hair would catch the breeze
And my skirt would round me twirl
The wind you cannot hold
It only passes through
The wind is something free
To itself it must be true
Time began to pass
I still would catch the wind
My hair it would caress
I'm the breeze that it would send
A woman, now I'm grown
A man I met one day
Wild and free and brave
Like the wind I heard them say
Ours eyes and hearts did meet
I found myself in love
He wispered something sweet
I became a winged dove
My hair he did caress
On wings of joy I've flown
In ecstacy I've twirled
The wild wind I have known
The wind I now have held
To truth he does belong
For I have caught the wind
And I have proved them wrong
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glindahoney
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2006-02-15 11:48:49]
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Re: To hold the wind
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by RandyMan on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 12:18:40 PM AEST
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| You can tell you found your true love reguardless of what others thought, exellent write. |
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Re: To hold the wind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:19:04 AM AEST
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this made me smile :)
this is amazing, and i love the little metaphors, and the bigger metaphor you carried on throughout. you're are a truly amazing writer.
great write
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