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Reliving the Pain

Contributed by justme03 on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 11:39:13 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

**************Authors*Note*************
I had to write this for my Creative Writing class.
It is supposed to be a snapshot poem which depicts
a memory. The first two stanzas create the scene
and the third adresses a person who would be
associated with the memory (snapshot).
**************************************

The sun is setting
as I look out my window.
The depression overtakes me
like the night comes to take
away the light of the sun.

In my heart I feel only loneliness
and I lean my head against the
window pane, clearly defeated.
All this grew from the distrust
you fed me and stemmed from
the hate you so bitterly
placed before me.

All you people,
I shall leave you nameless;
but, this is an ode to you,
of all the pain you put me through
and how never again will I let
you get the best of me.
All you nameless people
who love the hurt that
radiates from me, today
I hurt myself again
just to get back at you.
But not with a knife
placed on my wrist.
This hurt is of reliving
the memories –
Oh, the painful memories –
through words, that I write. . .
Just for you.
All you nameless people,
that is all you are.
Just, nameless people.

~Kortnie~

Copyright Â© justme03 ... [ 2006-02-15 11:39:13]
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Re: Reliving the Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by RandyMan on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 12:26:12 PM AEST
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I feel you. They deserve no name, unless its a bad one. Hope you got an A in your class.

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