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Stranger
Contributed by
deathbringer
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Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 09:33:40 AM in AEST
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You , stranger to my eyes ...
Have you come to stop the lies?
Stranger , where do you go?
You go to search for my lost soul?
You , stranger , where have you been?
When all I could do was scream?
But it doesn't matter anymore
I've already left sanity's shore
I'm on my way to my darkest desires
And leave behind all of the liars.
Copyright ©
deathbringer
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2006-02-15 09:33:40]
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Re: Stranger
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 11:48:11 AM AEST
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| hmm an interesting write i find this write very refreshing to read.good job |
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Re: Stranger
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by geirharald on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 02:48:12 AM AEST
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| ..Yes, i like it.. Yes , i like it! |
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Re: Stranger
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 02:42:23 AM AEST
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clear, yet mysterious.
it's great. |
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Re: Stranger
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 01:26:47 AM AEST
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| Well, that is one way to stop the lies.. they don't have to put forth much effort to challenge themselves when they have no one around to lie too, sort of takes their power away doesn't it. No need to supress yourself though. Darkest desires can mean several things.. from lonliness to dreams, to romance.. good job in writing, leaves the reader to find its own meaning in their own minds. hugs, raquelLeah |
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