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She Quietly Waited
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 06:18:14 AM in AEST
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Like rain that settled into a puddle
Once cleansing now lay dormant
She quietly waited
But was dismissed
Like the daisy growing through
The crack in the cement
Trying to show its beauty
Only to be trampled time and again
She tried to let others know
Her need for just a smile
She quietly waited
But was dismissed
Like the soft white snow
Large luminous flakes
That, fall on the street
Only to become black slush
Her heart and soul shone bright
But others ignored her beauty
She quietly waited
But was dismissed
Like all good things
They come to an end
She left this life
And to heaven did fly
At the pearly gates
She stood in line
She quietly waited
And was joyously welcomed
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Re: She Quietly Waited
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by WordsOfTheHeart on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 01:11:18 PM AEST
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Amazing poem. I love the way you write, you could just talk about a leaf and make it sound like the most amazing thing in this world. That's the way i'd like to be able to write... Anyways very beautiful write. I enjoyed it.
~Alucia~
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Re: She Quietly Waited
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:20:52 PM AEST
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This was brillant. It was well written and the flow was great. I liked how the poem ended it was a great..
take care
christina |
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Re: She Quietly Waited
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:31:11 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: She Quietly Waited
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 05:28:04 PM AEST
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| On earth we are like one tiny grain of sand mixed in with many other grains, but in heaven our little grain of sand and all little grains will all be noticed. Yes, their hearts are pure, patient, for they knows for what they offer here, like she does, it will be so much greater in heaven. Take the time to day to let others know just how much you appreciate, care and love them now. Very lovely poem Shari, thank you. You never will be dismissed by me. raquelLeah, your friend. |
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Re: She Quietly Waited
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 10:28:52 PM AEST
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Shari, this is so sweetly written with such tenderness. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us. I have read this several times now and I find it it be perfect.
hugs,
Rita |
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Re: She Quietly Waited
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 01:50:40 AM AEST
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An absolute cause for celebration. The magnificance of this classic flow and gentle topic, formed together and pushed through the quill tip of a very talented hand. I loved this poem. I think this is one of your best, and with your notebook being filled with such impressively inked words, that my friend, is saying something.
I loved this!
- SCM |
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