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I didn't want to say goodbye
Contributed by
Infamous
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Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 05:58:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I didn't want to say goodbye
For I will see the tears in your eye
I wish I didn't go
For your pains would hurt me so
But it was my time, my time to go
It happened so fast, like an arrow shot by bow
But always smile and pray for me
That in Paradise I would be
Listen to me now my beloved:
I felt heavy when I left the world
What I thought it was the edge of the sword
But a paradise opens to those who believe
I wish to meet you there when it is your turn to leave.
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Infamous
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2006-02-15 05:58:34]
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Re: I didn't want to say goodbye
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 04:03:16 AM AEST
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| it's nice, but it seems like there's something missing... |
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Re: I didn't want to say goodbye
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 12:54:28 AM AEST
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Very well done.
huggs,
emy
there is one missing acording to your write. |
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