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HATE

Contributed by wrybod on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Just disconnect me one more time
when I've not told you to
so I loose what I've been doing
d'you know what I will do
I'll go and get a hammer
The biggest you have seen
then come back to the study
and put it through your screen





Copyright © wrybod ... [ 2003-01-28 12:00:00]
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Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:11:36 PM AEST
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oh, cyber-world, I know the feeling, but you gotta love it


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:31:36 PM AEST
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Tsk, tsk... you can't let the technology win. Hahaha, this one made me laugh. Good one.


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:43:07 PM AEST
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Sulk sulk sulk not speaking to nobody nohow


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:46:07 PM AEST
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sulk sulk (glad you liked it) sulk sulk............
back tomorrow........I have a cunning plan.....


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:53:35 PM AEST
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haha, this is one of the few non-depressing poems i've read on here....i can totally relate. damn computers, they'd rule the world if we'd let them! great write xxx


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 02:47:10 PM AEST
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You always put a smile on my face wrybod ... thanks :))))


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:18:01 PM AEST
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Tease-whizz Glad you like it. Have a trawl through the rest of my stuff very little of it is depressiing I try to put smiles on peoples faces.


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:22:13 PM AEST
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DreamWeaver Thanks. I try to read and comment as much as I can but there is so much melancholy I have to give up before I've done half of what I intended.


Re: HATE (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:27:25 PM AEST
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Mines an IBM & it sucks that is why I cant log in now! MMMMMMMMMMMM WONDER!!!
~Heavenangel~


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:42:28 PM AEST
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Brothers unite If we don't keep up the HATE they'll take over the world


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by atwojay on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 07:46:03 PM AEST
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lol I know the feeling so well. I have one little nit-pick: "loose" should be spelled "lose."


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 02:39:50 AM AEST
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atwojay. See what it does to me I get so mad I can't spell. I coulde get Mick to correct it I suppose.Thanks.
Don't you feel sometimes that 'lose' should be spelled 'loose'? After all it doesn't rhyme with 'rose'. On the other hand English spelling as a whole needs rationalising.
It's a great site isn't it?


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 02:42:26 AM AEST
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Sorry sorry sorry I'm better now.VAL.


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 03:47:56 AM AEST
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atwojay. On second thoughts I meant it in the sense of an involuntary discharge (as of an arrow or gun) i.e. the work went speeding off into Cyberspace, in which case the spelling is correct.
Thank you anyway for deigning to sample and comment on my unworthy 'morsel' (grovel grovel, fawn fawn oh what I'll do not to upset people)


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 11:25:09 AM AEST
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haha! i love it, it made me laugh and smile (woohoo), i hate computers some times, other times, they let me read lush poetry like this!


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 02:08:27 PM AEST
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They only let you read lush (I like that word) things to keep their power over you..........
Did tou read Hate II?
You might like a few of mine mostly light hearted tongue in cheek stuff.. Thanks for the kind words..


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 02:34:00 AM AEST
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ROFL... i can't even rhyme, i'm laughing so hard...
wonderful poem... :)


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 08:28:23 PM AEST
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Glad you liked the verse an'all
drives me up the ruddy wall******


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by etherealgurl on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 02:24:03 AM AEST
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awesome! Love it!


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 03:08:52 AM AEST
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IT'S ALWAYS DOING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 03:42:05 PM AEST
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Oh how I emphasize with this.
I was disconnected already the moment I got only-line about 15 to 20 times.

I too felt like using a hammer and smashing the whole thing.

Bless you for speaking up.

Emphasize deeply

Elizabeth Dandy


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:03:35 PM AEST
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I think there's a built in assumption that it costs you money to stay on line. If you are not active it thinks it's doing you a favour to go off line. Then when you go to the next phase in your calculations you get "page cannot be found" AAAAAAArrrrrgh.

I pay £10 a month for unlimited access. I wish I could tell the bloody machine that.



Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 03:26:04 PM AEST
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Short and sweet and to the point...
------------------------------------
Oh, I love you carpenters,
with hammers, things to fill
If you want the Dell to work
You pay electric bill.

If after pay, it still does lay,
then I would really twitch
I'll lay you odds it's not the set
It merely is the switch.

If not the bill and not the switch
I know not what to think,
If now I'm asked to render thought
I'd say the Dell doth Sti......





Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 03:52:45 AM AEST
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It's just that it has this idea
I pay by the minute, OK fine.......
so when it thinks I'm not needing
it takes me back off line

sometimes I can recover
on the back button it's still there
but other times it isn't
and I really tare my hair.


Re: HATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:30:37 PM AEST
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id personally get a wrecking ball for my compaq, of course when i have another computer, which will be never, ahh.




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