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Life of endless struggle
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 01:57:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Love once coursed through
The veins of my world
Pushing life onward
Pulling me along…
But my heart stopped beating
And with it stopped the world
It all came crashing down…
Leaving me to fall apart
Left to reminisce of laughter
Remembering our smiles
And the happy times we had…
Now all that remains
Is this sting of angry bliss
The tingling of the pain
And the hatred of my soul…
The piercing whispers of the wind
Push memories through the night air
The worries of the world,
Never seemed so heavy
The days all run together
Like a cocktail of misery
Drowning me in sadness…
twisting together in seemless torture
One night’s dreams
Turn into the next night’s nightmares…
Pushing sleep away
The sweet embrace of shattered hopes
Cut wounds deep into my feet
As I walked across the treacherous floor
That once lead me where to be…
The sorrow of the moonlight
Dancing on my windows
Laughing at me all night long
Keeping me awake
And alive to this cursed world…
Teasing me with the hope of release
No matter how sweet and short it may be
From the grasp of you
And this life of endless struggle…
A failure I was to you
And a beast in your eyes
You told me all you had to say
And you left…
You let me know I made you hate me
And miserable in this world I trapped you in…
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Re: Life of endless struggle
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:08:59 AM AEST
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| Strong emotion. Good description. I love the lines about themoonlight dancing. |
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Re: Life of endless struggle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:43:16 AM AEST
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| Strong and emotional. |
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Re: Life of endless struggle
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by DarkFaerie on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 09:12:15 PM AEST
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| this poem captures all your emotions. dont give up, things will get better. great heartfelt write. |
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Re: Life of endless struggle
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 09:11:53 AM AEST
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| wow very strong and i can feel all the emotion you put into this. Everything happens for a reason and maybe there is somebody out there that will never make you feel that way. Enjoyed this poem. Wonderful |
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Re: Life of endless struggle
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 09:13:16 AM AEST
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| wow very strong and i can feel all the emotion you put into this. Everything happens for a reason and maybe there is somebody out there that will never make you feel that way. Enjoyed this poem. Wonderful |
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