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fade
Contributed by
candi
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Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 01:50:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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For a short time
I thought I had it all
you were the quiet of my storm
but now you cause the rain to fall
the lightening comes a' crashing
and the thunder roars so loud
I used to find you by my side
but now i've lost you in the crowd
you used to be my blanket
to keep me warm when I was cold
you were my shelter from the danger
seems to me you're just a stranger
and now our love has grown too old
better to have loved and lost
most people always say
too bad though, when I feel i've lost
that love just fade's away
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candi
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2006-02-15 01:50:42]
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Re: fade
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:03:03 AM AEST
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i used to find you by my side
but now i've lost you in the crowd- nice wording i like this poem. it hurts alot to lose someone you love. great write. A++++
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Re: fade
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:14:50 AM AEST
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| I love it, great wording. I love the line: you used to be the blanket to keep me warm when I was cold. This poem makes me think of love like a shelter orsecurity blanket that once taken away leaves uswondering, cold, confused. Awesome write. |
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Re: fade
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:44:18 AM AEST
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| nicely written, well worded. |
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