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Thanks, But No Thanks
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 11:24:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Thanks again my love
For picking up the pieces
Then stowing them away
Ironing out the creases
Thanks for putting back together
My broken little heart
Never complaining one bit
That we're a thousand miles apart
Thanks again for sheltering me
And blocking out the rain
But in doing so, I'm afraid
You've added to my pain
You've worked so hard to help me
Get through, or over, it all
But you've also denied yourself
True love when it came to call
She can make you smile
More than I ever could
She'll mean more to you
More than I ever would
I can tell it's not there anymore
I can see it in your eyes
You just don't love me the way you used to
So it's time we said our goodbyes
So thanks again my darling
For showing me all love could be
And caring so much that you would
Put your feelings aside for me
But that's not what I want at all
Leaving your heart empty and blank
I don't need love that's not mine
So thanks, but no thanks
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2006-02-14 23:24:16]
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Re: Thanks, But No Thanks
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 11:41:18 PM AEST
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| Oh Kie, this is so sad....... did you feel that? It was a big hug from me. Peace and love to ya, Laura |
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Re: Thanks, But No Thanks
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by Jane_Doe on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 12:33:01 AM AEST
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| Great poem. My sister picked it out to read and I'm glad she did because it was reall lovely. But sad. i hope your pain lessens. |
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Re: Thanks, But No Thanks
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by Candi on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 01:54:59 AM AEST
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| this is amazing, altho it is sad. but it does happen. i've been in this situation before. it isnt easy. you expressed it to a t. great write. |
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Re: Thanks, But No Thanks
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:14:08 AM AEST
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| yes very sad. love sucks... but happy valentines day anyway! great write. very strong |
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Re: Thanks, But No Thanks
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:25:25 AM AEST
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| This is so sad. What a horrible thing to realize. You portrayed thefeeling well though, it'ssimple and direct, strong emotion. |
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Re: Thanks, But No Thanks
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:46:49 AM AEST
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| Sad, the words well chosen. good poem. |
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