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my one and only
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 04:52:02 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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you're my love, my one and all
you make the world seem so small
i love you more than words can say
and i think about you everyday
you're my world, my life, my heart
nothing can tear us appart
you take the grey skies and paint them blue
there's nothing i want,
except you........
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2006-02-14 16:52:02]
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Re: my one and only
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by poetmarie on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 06:15:38 PM AEST
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| Short and sweet, very nice. It's direct and loving. |
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Re: my one and only
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by frankcube on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 10:49:02 PM AEST
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Very short and sweet. I liked it =]
You take the grey skies and paint them blue
I really liked the imagery you displayed in this line.
Please consider some of my own poetry as well, if you have time. Thank you. |
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