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i tried to join you
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 03:03:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a single tear a broken start a misguided heart that was torn apart
she said i love you whispered in my dreams
but remembering that night and the horriable screams
yes we live to die but its in between that counts
but in solitude and confused nothing helps
she was my world but she took it away
i can not get over that day
i tried to join you but death wouldnt take
i did the jump but death was a fake
i smile each day like a skull on the moon
i see the way i have burried myself in the tomb
on this day i will say good bye
it is time i learnt to fly
i will never forget but i will move on
its been awhile since you have gone
i will mourn today and that will be all
this is just pain i will scrawl
on my bone dust wall
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2006-02-14 15:03:47]
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Re: i tried to join you
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 03:12:53 PM AEST
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touching write I feel your mourning and loss.
For that Im so sorry
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Re: i tried to join you
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 11:54:23 PM AEST
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Relic...your writes usually get my attention...the last line here got me this time......
" i will mourn today and that will be all
this is just pain i will scrawl
on my bone dust wall"
Liked it....Peace man, Laura
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