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Sonnet #5
Contributed by
MrWrite
on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 11:34:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I fan the flames with a hopeless deed
To prevent the death of a weary heart
The darkest spirit of dread I feed
For fear that life’ll be torn apart
A gaping void of time and space
Appears to stretch eternally
I pray to God to help erase
This loneliness and leave me be
Words and rhyme can do no more
To help resolve a feel so cold
This pain of loss do I abhor
I’d end if all if I were bold
The pain of a blow would be welcome respite
To save me from this ne’er ending night
Copyright ©
MrWrite
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2006-02-14 11:34:17]
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Re: Sonnet #5
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 12:25:17 PM AEST
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a delight to read flowing with rich emotions and the ending sealed the deal.
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Re: Sonnet #5
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by Kayden on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 04:53:33 PM AEST
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| Good Job.... This made me keep reading.... Great job.. Keep it up... |
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