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Truly
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Truly....
See my arms wide open,run to me till you've no breath
I will hold you till forevers end,until inhalations death
Somewhere in your darkness,I will help to find the light
And if fate should be so giving,I will hold you here tonight
So very much a part of us,this yearning we've inside
To have a love we've dreamed of,a hunger long denied
Dare to dream the impossible,then in your dreams believe
Know true love is boundless,more than fantasies conceived
You could look towards temptation,lose yourself in it's hold
Yet temptation is not lasting,just a surface above the cold
For temptation is a game thats played,a lure for the heart
Non dependable, void of warmth,your dreams will fall apart
Love is deeper than a fleeting glance into temptations eyes
Love is stronger for the sadness when two must say goodbye
Love is what keeps you company when he or she is far away
Love is given without thinking,and true love should never stray
Forgiveness should be found with love,as with understanding
The purest love will be patient,peaceful,undemanding
Love should dance to laughter,friendship of skin and mind
Yet true love should also be found ,in not so happier times
There's a balance needed to truly love,as there is to receive
And I know that we will find this love,in my heart,I truly believe
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-01-28 10:40:00]
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Re: Truly
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 10:51:20 AM AEST
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| I believe you truly will too! Great love write,I liked this one! Christina |
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Re: Truly
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:24:32 PM AEST
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| beautifully stunning.. my heart goes out to you.. happiness and smiles to you.. hugs nessa |
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Re: Truly
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by wolfflow on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:27:58 PM AEST
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| outstanding poem, you tapped in to something human and deep, defined a feeling that we all feel and in a way that we can all relate to.. |
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Re: Truly
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 05:07:33 PM AEST
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| There's something in your poetry that is so real so human. All of your poetry is beautiful. It's like I can read your poetry and connect with your words so easily. I love that. Great writing. |
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Re: Truly
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 12:50:43 AM AEST
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Oh wow this was simply great. Don't really know what to say left me rather speechless and with a damn tear in my eye lol. Beautiful
Bobo (Joel) |
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