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Ode to a spirit
Contributed by
Alma
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Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 11:05:37 AM in AEST
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The world I've seen in her eyes...
Oh the beauty...
How can you describe endless universe?
Why do you wish to know all the secrets?
Don't you think that ignorance is bliss
Her hands carried me through the darkness
Her smile made me grow inside
Her tears made wounds on my flesh
So what if she died?
So what if somebody took her life away?
So what if she was too young to experience life?
So what if I know that bullet could have hit me?
Would she be sitting here, writing
and listening Circle
Would she be a pop princes, drama queen or a metal goddess?
Would she still make me sad and happy at the same time?
Would she still fight to protect me or
would I stand up to spare her
If god exists one day I'll ask these questions
But the only thing that can make me cry now that I'm numb
is knowing that this could have ben ended in time
And I know if war lasted 3 weeks instead 3 years of living hell
I wouldn't be asking these questions
she would be here making me laugh
So what if I know something that will never stop bothering me
SHE WAS MURDERED A MONTH BEFORE ALL THE ATTACKS ON BOSNIA WERE ENDED
Copyright ©
Alma
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2006-02-14 11:05:37]
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Re: Ode to a spirit
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 12:28:31 PM AEST
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I felt a lonesome sigh within your words. So touching so sad......
Many questions that events like this bring to our thought making us weary and in loss of our hope and faith.
Blessings to you
Michelle |
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Re: Ode to a spirit
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 01:18:30 PM AEST
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| Very sad. |
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Re: Ode to a spirit
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by Lady_Daisy on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 10:06:22 PM AEST
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| Very sad indeed. I felt this poem started off good, but it sort of collapsed at the end. Heh, but it only my opinion. =) |
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Re: Ode to a spirit
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by Kayden on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 05:12:11 PM AEST
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| Yet again another great wright is Born... Awesome job... As i was reading it kept my attention from begining to end. I was able to feel the pain they were feeling... Great Description.... |
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Re: Ode to a spirit
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 02:49:53 PM AEST
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Thank you, Happy Easter!
His resurrection is our resurrection!
RaquelLeah |
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