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Bloody Valentine Card
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 10:10:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It was a gloomy day
I walked through eerie halls,
A note was left for me
Somewhere, between these castle walls.
It said, "Secret Admirer,"
But whom would it be?
I don't know of anyone who would do this
I want to know, why me?
I followed a trail of rose petals
That were layed on the stone floor,
They led me down a narrow hallway
And to a big wooden door.
I had taken a candle opera
Off of the wall,
It had grown cold and dark
But, I had forgotten my shawl.
I grabbed the handle
Of the wooden door,
Opened it slowly
And slipped on the bloody floor.
Inside the room
I saw a table of gifts,
I didn't know whether to walk away
Or run away, so swift.
I proceeded to walk over to the table
And there I saw,
A bloody Valentine
In a dead bird's claw.
I opened up the Valentine
Got blood all over my hands,
Glanced over at the corner
A dark shadow there stands.
He didn't say anything
Just watched the horror on my face,
It's nights like these
I want to earse.
I ran quickly to the door
And tried to escape,
But the shadow loomed over me
And covered me with his cape.
He took me outside
And buried me in the yard,
He shovelled sand in my face
Upon my grave, he placed the bloody Valentine card.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Feb.13/2006
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2006-02-14 10:10:25]
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Re: Bloody Valentine Card
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by CloakedMystery on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 10:50:08 AM AEST
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| wow. i love it. very nice. i can picture your words in my head as if they were a movie i once saw. u've givin my something 2 think about. ill past it on 2 my friends and i noe they will like it too. thank u. |
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Re: Bloody Valentine Card
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 12:57:38 PM AEST
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A terrific and unique presentation on a loving subject cynthia u do dark well i enjoyed reading this as all your poetry.
(((((cynthia))))))
Ben |
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Re: Bloody Valentine Card
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 08:17:50 PM AEST
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oooo! wicked creepy lol excellent write:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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