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Will You Still
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 11:51:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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First I wrote
To you, a note
That I was too afraid to sign.
I liked you then,
I love you now,
Now that I call you mine.
If only I
Could be with you
On this most special day,
I might not GIVE
You candy,
But I would TAKE your cares away.
I long to
Hold you close again,
To see you all the time
I don't think
I have to ask,
But...
Will you still be my Valentine?
Copyright ©
sir_odd87
... [
2006-02-13 23:51:09]
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Re: Will You Still
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 01:13:29 AM AEST
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aw this is so sweet but I won't candy right now please and please make it chocolet.
All jokes aside this is a beautifulo write.
huggs, happy valentines,
emy |
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Re: Will You Still
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by Faust on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 07:37:11 AM AEST
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| I am really amazed how great a poem this is. I think it should be longer but it doesn't need it. |
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Re: Will You Still
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 07:57:04 PM AEST
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A thousand times, yes...
it's a beautiful poem...you always write such wonderful things when you feel them... |
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