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be my valentine
Contributed by
rawjer
on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 07:45:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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never can understand, how much I understand you
so hard to comprehand, how much I love being around you
Beautiful you are, while you are sleeping
so quiet you are, why you are dreaming
empty is how I felt, before i met you
full of love is how I feel, now that im with you
I have not much time, so ill make this brief
trust me always, and ill never bring you grief
and do all i can, to set your mind at ease
and one more thing
be my valentine, if you would please?
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Re: be my valentine
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 10:56:43 AM AEST (User
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I ABSO-FREAKING-LUTELY LOVE THIS.
very sweet, very, very amazing write.
i especially love the last line...wow this poem is just beautiful. thank you for sharing.
(one, minor, MINOR thing...just be sure to fix any grammatical issues, so people are reading your words instead of critisizing your mistakes.)
GREAT WRITE!
- Bethani - |
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