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Great Luna Moth
Contributed by
Evier
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Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 05:52:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Its pale green luminescence fluffs above me;
On the ground there are specks of the dust.
I know it must be covering me,
But to see the sight, it must.
Its wings are like a fairy’s gown,
Its antennae are fern from the wood.
It whooshes, and it heads for the town;
I would chase it the whole way if I could.
Its giant shadow runs on the ground,
Its huge form hugs the air.
The simple sight of it would astound
Anyone who saw this beast so rare.
It lands atop the town like a cloth,
It is the beautiful Great Luna Moth.
Copyright ©
Evier
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2006-02-13 17:52:55]
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Re: Great Luna Moth
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by Ka_ching234 on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 09:47:49 AM AEST
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| It's ok, it just needs a little more depth. |
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Re: Great Luna Moth
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 10:52:37 AM AEST
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| This is a really beautiful poem. I hope youre going to keep writing! Great job! |
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Re: Great Luna Moth
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 09:33:37 AM AEST
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| very good poem, very detailed. did you get a good grade? hope you did. thank you for sharing. |
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